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Steve X16XE
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Therefore proves that we were not on the phone at the time of the incident, as what the guy in the Mondeo said to be false.

It doesn't feel right to me. People who have "a" GCSE or above please help.

[Edited on 28-08-2007 by Steve X16XE]
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28th Aug 07 at 00:29   View Garage View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
Shouldn't it have a comma after incident?
Steve X16XE
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Like that?
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Not enough information!
Steve X16XE
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That my closing statement.
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what is the guy in the mondeo saying is false? also 'guy' isnt a professional term.
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twat would be more appropriate I'm guessing.
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therefore proving that we were not using the celular phone at the time of the incident, contrary to the statment of the other party.

nb: i cant spell though, come to mention it my grammar is probs shit to lol.
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the guy in the mondeo said that he saw me on my phone. He lied.
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28th Aug 07 at 00:33   View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
Sound's quite good that. Cheers
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or

contravene

therefore proving that we were not using the celular phone at the time of the incident, directly contraveneing the statment of the other party.
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i no probs im pretty good with writing, just cant spell lol.
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Thus proving we were not using the mobile phone at the time of the incident, contrary to the beliefs of the other party involved.
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cellular phone is sooo american!
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28th Aug 07 at 00:36   View Garage View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
TBF, this is the last place you should be asking for grammatical advice, most of it on here is shocking
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doing quite good so far. I think that the bad ones are tooked up in bed at this time
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I have this.......

Therefore proving that we were not using our mobile phones at the time of the incident, directly contravening the statment of the other party.
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, thus proving we were not using mobile phones at the time of the incident, contrary to the statement of the other party.

copy and paste
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take out the 'directly' its ott
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I think i like the directly. It's like kicking that guy up the arse.
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At the end of that do i say..........

cheers, Steve.

Thankyou.

Thanks, Steve.

Love you loads xxx

GIVE ME MY PHONE BACK!!!

Any ideas please coz i'm getting tired and just want to shout at him.
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Is it a formal letter, or an e-mail?
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email to a police man.
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Adressed to 'PC Policeman', or 'dear sir/madam'?
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Thanks,

Steve.

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