RichR
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http://www.pistonheads.com/sales/1651942.htm
Does this look okay as an advert? Does it require any further info?
Also is it worth upgrading it to a premium advert? just a free standard ad at the minute. ![](/board/images/smile/thumbs.gif)
[Edited on 19-04-2010 by LiVe LeE]
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N3CRO
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I've just put my Corsa on there using free standard advert and I've had some interest already so you may not need to go prem.
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adiohead
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I like it, but it's missing an interior shot imo
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GF-91
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Yeah, needs an interior shot
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bubble
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definitely pay the 12.50 and youll get more interest. standard adverts show up last, i had scooby on standard for a week, no interest, once went on premium i had emails the same day.
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RichR
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Only get three photos with standard, I could swap one of them for this one
![](http://www.corsasport.co.uk/carimages/7400/dsc00843.jpg)
but which one should I swap it for
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adiohead
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whack it on autotrader too.
I've sold all my vehicles on there within 2 weeks.
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adiohead
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quote: Originally posted by LiVe LeE
Only get three photos with standard, I could swap one of them for this one
![](http://www.corsasport.co.uk/carimages/7400/dsc00843.jpg)
but which one should I swap it for
get rid of the pic with the doors/boot open
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jr
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loads of people discount the prem ad's as thats where all the rubbish trader ad's are, there was a thread on PH about it and 80% of people skip through them
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RichR
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Changed the photos but it could take up to an hour to appear online
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Daveskater
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I put my old Corsa up as a premium ad and it sold in one week.
Partially did it because I wanted to put loads of pics on ![](/board/images/smile/lol.gif)
Numberwang!
Originally posted by AlunJ
I like you Dave, you are a man of men
Originally Whatapp'd by Neo
Dave's maybe capable of a drive-by cuddle
Look at my pictures
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redtom
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i skip through the premiums normally unless something catches my eye for the reason said above.
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adiohead
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looks much better now
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Fad
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Take out the bad points and the bit about it being prices in line with autotrader etc
You can tell them the bad points over the phone when they ring up.
job done
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sand-eel
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You say its immaculate, but then list the bad bits?
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ed
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It's no good for a car advert. For starters you've described the car accurately and used good spelling. Also, the pictures appear to be in focus and you pointed the camera at the car. It's like nothing I've seen before
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Eddx14xe
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quote: Originally posted by sand-eel
You say its immaculate, but then list the bad bits?
Its only a matt and alloy though, its not like it has a rust hole in the wing or anything like that
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RichR
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I wouldn't say a worn driver's mat affects the condition of the car; the seats, bodywork, trim, engine compartment, brakes, boot, spare wheel well, windows are all immaculate; no scratches, dents or dings - at the end of the day its a 9 year old car - there will always be minor issues but mechanically and structually its sound.
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adiohead
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quote: Originally posted by ed
It's no good for a car advert. For starters you've described the car accurately and used good spelling. Also, the pictures appear to be in focus and you pointed the camera at the car. It's like nothing I've seen before
very good point.
plus, WHY HAVEN'T YOU USED THE CAPSLOCK? :MAD:
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