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SAL
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6th Mar 07 at 22:46   View Garage View User's Profile U2U Member Reply With Quote
http://www.pistonheads.com/sales/142152.htm

should i change the add a bit ? any ideas please people
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the - this
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off - of
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Yeah! Like add mileage and number of owners etc etc, very breif
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engine spec, details of what's been done, change 'of' to 'off', service history?

all the things you'd want to know if you're buying a car need to be there.
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to be honest its a hopeless ad

You could write a bit more of the spec, use some punctuation, and correct grammer.

Also..... is it really an Irmsher show car? Not just kitted
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millage is on the add, owners ok yeh good point seeing as im the second

spelling is not my stong point
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you'd be aswel writing down the spec list
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Irmscher *
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Write it up, post it on here and someone will check the spelling for you Steve, looks a bit more pro that way

Spec is the most important thing though, will save you having loads of people ringing up and you getting pissed off, or forgetting stuff
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just use WORD
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The more you put, the more appeling it will be to people
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dont have word will re vamp it a bit then...

does anyone here ever use autotrader ?
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if i was buying a car.... yes
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Service history, pros and cons.

Seriously, it'll take aaaaaages to sell a car with an add like yours
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i thought it was appealling
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I used autotrader, it was shit, got loads of scammers, wouldn't use it again.
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http://www.pistonheads.com/sales/131627.htm

thats how u do it
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quote:
Originally posted by Robin
I used autotrader, it was shit, got loads of scammers, wouldn't use it again.


Really?
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quote:
Originally posted by ChazSXi
http://www.pistonheads.com/sales/131627.htm

thats how u do it


yes good example
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here is mine
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awaiting e mail on changing
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Heres mine - http://www.pistonheads.com/sales/140935.htm
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Looks abit dirty to be a show car. Havent you got any cleaner photos?
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quote:
Originally posted by Gareth John
Looks abit dirty to be a show car. Havent you got any cleaner photos?


I thought that - its manky in the 1st 2 pic's

Ive only got 1 decent pic of mine so thats all ive included!!

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