elliott023
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YES i know this shud be in photo section, but it doesnt get enough view for my liking, so here it is, jsut started it today, doing a astra mk4 rally car, its about 30% done so dont crit me, ideas wud be also nice thanks....
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DannyB
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The whole theme is mismatched, it looks nothing like a rally car.
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daymoon
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i quite like that except for stickers.. not in this style anyway.
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elliott023
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are you some sort of fuckin spastic mate? can u not read like, 30% complete WIP fuckin tart aimed @ DannyB
[Edited on 24-11-2009 by elliott023]
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DannyB
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Originally posted by elliott023
are you some sort of fuckin spastic mate? can u not read like, 30% complete WIP fuckin tart
Aww don't get touchy, it looks like a modified Astra that's been through a field, not a rally car. It's well done, but doesn't look right.
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am4nf
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tbh that would fail at rally one big dip or jump and it would be utterly fucked
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Ian
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I was looking forward to seeing something with big wheels and arches, covered in a bit sponsor logo.
And the only person who can't read is the one who made the decision to post a shop in GC.
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DannyB
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Ian, how dare you have an opinion.
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elliott023
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ye its 30% complete is taht realy hard to understand? its not finished, you lot clearly dont know how much work is involved in this.
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DannyB
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Yeah, I clearly don't know as I've never used photoshop, ever. If you can't take a bit of criticism then don't post, not everyone will like it. it would look far better in motion, not as a van, with different wheels, not as low, without the scene stickers, CF bootlid etc
[Edited on 24-11-2009 by DannyB]
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taylorboosh
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it looks ok but as said not a rally car 1 bit
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Dom
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quote:
Originally posted by elliott023
are you some sort of fuckin spastic mate? can u not read like, 30% complete WIP fuckin tart aimed @ DannyB
[Edited on 24-11-2009 by elliott023]
FPMSL
Can't take criticism then don't post, simplez 
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AndyCorsaSport
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Looks shit tbh.
Oh can i say that? Not going to cry to mummy are you?
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am4nf
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dont go for a rally car, just stick as a dirty astra
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elliott023
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ye do u not all get it? 305 complete why do u say what everyones else ses, not one person says anything nice on this forum....... and andy corsa no im not a little boy like yourself gettin hard over the internet grow up, like to see some of you do better
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DannyB
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I did say something nice, you just chose to ignore it and throw your toys out of the pram.
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It's well done
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elliott023
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well can some one please give me ideas as i asked in the starting post please? becuase im just doing the arches now and getting a cage to fit
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DannyB
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quote:
Originally posted by elliott023
well can some one please give me ideas as i asked in the starting post please? becuase im just doing the arches now and getting a cage to fit
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Originally posted by DannyB
It would look far better in motion, not as a van, with different wheels, not as low, without the scene stickers, CF bootlid etc
Look at some pictures of actual rally cars and take inspiration.
[Edited on 24-11-2009 by DannyB]
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AndyCorsaSport
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quote:
Originally posted by elliott023
ye do u not all get it? 305 complete why do u say what everyones else ses, not one person says anything nice on this forum....... and andy corsa no im not a little boy like yourself gettin hard over the internet grow up, like to see some of you do better
Little boy like me? Im older than you for a fucking start. Just basically saying, when you say "what do you think of this" and some one replys "its not very rally looking" dont go off on one, we all know its a work in progress. Trying to give you advice by saying atm, its not looking like a rally car. Needs stickers, lose the hugely weaved CF boot, put the window back with rally names and flags on it, rally wheels not jap style etc
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Dom
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quote:
Originally posted by elliott023
well can some one please give me ideas as i asked in the starting post please? becuase im just doing the arches now and getting a cage to fit
How about posting it in the correct sub-forum numbnuts? You're not special, therefore follow suit like everyone else 
As for the photoshop, apart from the mud (looks pretty good) and wheels it's not really looking like a rally car, especially the carbon boot (looks out of place) and smoothed locks (don't really see it on rally cars). Importantly though, you're missing the usual traits - big arches, diffusers and big-arse spoilers (tend to be carbon now), lots of ground clearance, rolled exhaust etc.
Get on google images and get researching.
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djgritt
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This is an Astra Rally Car;
This is not;
30% complete or not, thats going in completely the wrong direction to be even considered as a 'Rally Car' 
Look at the real one, even on the side it's leaning on there is still a significant arch gap!
[Edited on 24-11-2009 by djgritt]
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grez12
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Originally posted by AndyCorsaSport
Looks shit tbh.
Oh can i say that? Not going to cry to mummy are you?
i am going to have to agree with this comment but would rather say its fu&king sh^t lol
next time try looking at real rally cars and grow up and stop throwing your dummy about the forum because if you cannot find the correct sub-forum then you proberbly wont find your dummy if you throw it !
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John
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Do not copy
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Adam C
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Even if its 30% done it still doesn't look like a rally car, looks more like an attempt to make it into a scene with the whole van style windows, whole red lights and stickers.
The picture djgritt posted is more what you should be aiming for, not exactly the same but styling wise go for whats in that picture
My Arden Blue Astra GSi MK4 on BBS LM's Project Thread
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MarkSport
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quote:
Originally posted by DannyB
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Originally posted by elliott023
are you some sort of fuckin spastic mate? can u not read like, 30% complete WIP fuckin tart
Aww don't get touchy, it looks like a modified Astra that's been through a field, not a rally car. It's well done, but doesn't look right.
Totally agree danny,There was no need for you to get all touchy mate.Danny is just telling you his opinion so you have to respect some people will like it,some won't. personally i think it's good apart from the van style windows and the stickers.makes it look like a failed attmept at a muddy euro mk4.wheels look good but the rest is abit off
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