will_ainsworth
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well today i got high and thought it would be cool to write a poem, dont ask why, so i took a photo and layed the writing on it, anyone else done similar, if not, your task is to make one, its a random thing to do. but hay 
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will_ainsworth
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oh and i just realised i haven't capitalised some of the I's and shit :\ fail
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Matt L
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the n in notice and r in reclous need to be white imo.
other than that its really good 
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Budgie
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that seriously your own poem?
Good work if it is squire
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MarkSport
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agreed with budgie,if its your own poem that ace wording
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will_ainsworth
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yeh, i wrote it stoned, i used to write alot of songs so iguess its the same sorta thing, when im in that 'mood' words just roll of my tongue, i thought it was a bit cheesy once sober again!
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will_ainsworth
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one for you mark lol
awaken to the sight of blurry vision,
this is where i will make the decision,
to take my eyes and switch them around,
my heart beats fast, its a scary sound.
The surgeon walks in its the final procedure,
From this moment on i will see not just hear ya!
as i look above the room gets dark,
this was the story about switched eye mark.
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Jamie-C
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 Should post that one offday so more see it
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MarkSport
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That actually made me laugh,although its better in here than in offday
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will_ainsworth
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no pic but....
Im feeling cold and tired, my eyes cant sleep
theres to much to see, no time to count sheep
I sit here waiting, another day passes by
Anger, frustration, i just want to fly high.
To look at my past, to be happy and proud,
Im wanting much more, should i scream out loud.
take the bull by its horns, in life you get one chance,
To take this moment and make it better, enhance.
One day, one week, one month, one year
We all have a chance, before we disappear.
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MarkSport
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Thats ace
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chloe16v
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one that i wrote afew years ago, i dont have the same mind set to sit and write any more 
I slash my wrists like before,
But it isn’t enough I just need more.
So I go to my room and close the door,
Watching the blood as it begins to pour.
Digging deeper in to my skin
Trying to release the pain within.
Trying to forget you awful sin.
Now my life is growing dim.
Why did you do it, why didn’t you care?
You left me with a burden to hard to bare.
All of my feelings I do not share,
To let it out I do not dare.
The things you did I can never forgive.
Because of you I don’t want to live.
One last thing before I die,
“I HATE YOU” and “goodbye”
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chloe16v
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and another
i miss you more and more each day
although i find it hard to say
the thing you say and the things you do
makes me mad being away from you
im loving you with all my heart
its really tearing me apart
a love like ours will never die
just be strong, no need to cry
far away but still as keen
a perfect love it has always been
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will_ainsworth
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First one scares me :/
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scaron5188
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quote:
Originally posted by will_ainsworth
First one scares me :/
x2
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Cavey
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First one is really good actually Chloe, the missus does similar stuff when she's going through a down patch, she's really talented as well actually 
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nathy_87
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Will, that's bloody awesome, if you correctd it, it'd make an awesome wallpaper. 
And that one about duke,
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MarkSport
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quote:
Originally posted by chloe16v
To let it out I do not dare.
Likes, You told us all on cs everything about your underage sex with the clown and that
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MarkSport
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I worte one for my mates funeral and read it out.....
If it's not clear enough it reads....
On the 6th of june your life was taken
personally i think that god was mistaken
He took you from our world, but not from our hearts
your role as a friend came in many different parts
there was the helpfull side where you always knew best
there was the muscle man side which always wore a vest
there was a demanding side where you never gave up
and the laughter side which always cracked us up
serious friends come way before best
this is you paul,you're different from the rest
you were the guy i could run to and never feel down
always happy when i knew you were around
i guess all that is left are the memorys that i have
all of them good, not one that is bad.
i know you're looking down from the clouds up above
my nan is there too, could you pass on a hug?
Now i'm going to do what i know is for the best
leaving you now to go get some rest
Just have a good time and shine on us all
my very dear friend that i know as paul
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