XSIHardy
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Registered: 5th Feb 08
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Deleted some off the details btw as don't wont them on the net for example address and mobile numbers. but can any one give me some advise on what would sound better, and make it overall a better CV thank you
Sam Hardy
ADRESS
Tel:
E-mail: Mobile:
Summary
An Enthusiastic, forward thinking, highly organised, reliable and practical individual, seeking an opportunity to develop my potential. Confident of making a positive contribution and giving me an opportunity to prove my worth.
Work History
May 2007- Present Sales Assistant,
Communicating with others and customers.
Dress sense.
Hygiene.
Responsible for goods that are in the store.
Reliable.
Punctual.
Demonstrate excellent communication and customer care skills.
Education
September 2006- June 2007 City & Guilds I.T System Support
Level 2 Vocational Qualifications.
Over Four Units – 2 Distinctions and 2 Credits Achieved
September 2004- June 2006 School
Completed 10 Gcse’s
Key Skills Level 1.
Personal details
Date of birth:
Full Clean Driving License
Other Interests
Computing
Technology
Gym
Socialising
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stuartmitchell
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Registered: 24th Apr 04
Location: Kirkliston, Edinburgh
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You have the right idea bud, as a recruitment consultant I always put the education details before employment.
On the employment part I would have 5 actual responsibilities as opposed to characteristics such as punctual etc.
Also, goes without saying you need to have your employers name on there too e.g.
May 2007 - Present X COMPANY
Position Sales assistant
I would also include a section on achievements on there too!!
Hope that helps!
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XSIHardy
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Registered: 5th Feb 08
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Thanks a lot  its for desktop support job
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stuartmitchell
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Registered: 24th Apr 04
Location: Kirkliston, Edinburgh
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no probs!
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Carl
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Registered: 9th May 04
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I'd change the "summary" bit to "personal profile"
Also try and give examples. I'd also review the last sentance as it isn't written very good.
"Confident of making a positive contribution and giving me an opportunity to prove my worth. "
I'm currently doing mine but it needs a few tweeks, If I get it done i'll post it up.
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